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Wednesday 26 August 2015

You make me a poet!


Thoughts
Wavering and distressing.
Pain
Piercing and jabbing.
Emotions
Supple and vulnerable.


All of them find refuge
In my outpouring poetry;
I soak my dry words
In the clammy pool of my musings 
A poem is born
And I feel liberated. 


Our love
Soulful and ageless.
Our separation
Sour and Stinging.
Our story
Eternal and unforgettable.


You are there
In every verse that I write;
As muse or as memory,
It's you who make me a poet.
Feeling you closely again
Is the joy of writing poetry.


Linking this poem to Midweek Motif: The Joy of Poetry



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71 comments:

  1. No doubt the power of poetry allows one to express and let out their emotions - their soul at ease.
    Excellent write :D

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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    1. So true, Sanaa. I feel blessed to be a poet.
      Thanks dear. Much love :)

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  2. Writing poetry is a joy and it gives us a place of release.
    Very well expressed

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  3. to write from experiences thats a good place to be at

    have a nice Wednesday

    much love...

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  4. joy is birthed out of pain...very nicely written...

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  5. You have expressed yourself beautifully ~~~

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  6. This is a wonderful response to the prompt - what would we do with all those emotions, if we didnt have a pen and a page? So well expressed.

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    1. Exactly, Sherry. I would have gone insane, if I wouldn't have with me, a pen and paper to express them. Thanks a ton :)

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  7. " I soak my dry words
    In the clammy pool of my musings
    A poem is born
    And I feel liberated. "....that feeling of finding Just Right Words.. is universal..Aha!

    Beautiful poem, Purba... :)

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    1. So true, Panchali. That feeling is indeed beautiful and liberating. Thank you so much :)

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  8. A poem is born
    And I feel liberated. .... me, too. This is so true

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  9. I guess I should write poems too to liberate myself...I can literally feel the same in some of the works I have read 😊

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  10. Yes, our own personal experiences are great prompts for writing for then our own emotions can be voiced and touch others too.

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    1. True, I totally agree. They are the best and the most meaningful prompts of writing poetry :)

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  11. I like your passion for poetry. I can see that love keeps your flames burning.

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  12. oooo--I love the clammy pool and the sour separation (sorry) that you transform through words.

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    1. Thank you so much, Susan. Great to see you here, after a long time. Hope your health is much better now :)

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  13. Indeed, what would we do with our emotions if it were not for poetry? And, indeed, when a poem is born it is such a liberating feeling.....like giving birth.

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    1. Indeed it is, Mary. One of the best feelings ever.

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  14. Expressing yourself in soulful manner is an art.. And god gives this gift to only limited people and these people are known as poet/author :)

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    1. So true, Anjali. Thanks for this lovely comment :)

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  15. "A poem is born
    And I feel liberated"

    I loved these lines. It sums up the feeling so well.
    Nicely done :)

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  16. Each and every word is so soul-stirring and beautifully weaved dear. Whenever I read your heart-wrenching compositions, I am just left with "WOW". Loved the use of "As muse or as memory". Such profoundness and depth of feelings, I am awestruck. God bless you! :)

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    1. And whenever I read your comment on my posts, I feel so happy and blessed. The way you encourage and appreciate me touches my heart. Much love dear and God bless you :)

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  17. I feel the same, when I write one.

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  18. The joy of writing a poem :) So wonderful.

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  19. Wow! Exactly my feelings, Purba! Only I couldn't have said it as beautifully...Great poem!

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    1. You are really too humble to say this Sir. Thanks for the appreciation. Means a lot :)

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  20. Beautifully expressed...love it. Thanks for sharing

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  21. ah :) lovely!!! who is the 'you' here btw??? ;)

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    1. Thanks dear :)
      "You" is my fond muse who helps me to write these poems.

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  22. Very well expressed Purba. You are a master of words. :)

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    1. Thank you so much Indrani for this appreciation. Means a lot :)

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  23. Lovely poem. I like these lines-
    "You are there
    In every verse that I write;
    As muse or as memory,
    It's you who make me a poet.
    Feeling you closely again
    Is the joy of writing poetry."

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  24. My feelings exactly and you've put it so beautifully. Loved it to the core. <3

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    1. Thank you so much, Saru. So happy that you loved it :)

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  25. ooohs.. joy of writing a poem when in love :D This is romantic and I love your writings.

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  26. I really like this poem. You write of expressing your emotions, while expressing your emotions. Lovely thoughts here and I think what you say resonates with every poet. It certainly did with me.

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    1. Thank you so much Myrna. I am glad that it resonated with you :)

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  27. Love does amazing things. Well written.

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  28. Yes, that's the power of poetry...it makes one free.... :-)

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  29. A beautiful expression of emotions, love and pain through the poem Purba.

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  30. your emotions wonderfully penned in this piece.

    gracias for sharing

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  31. A great and beautiful poem describing the joy of writing a poem. You have beautifully expressed that pleasure in this poem... Great work. :-)

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  32. "A poem is born
    And I feel liberated."

    Amazing piece of Poetry. Thanks for sharing.

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